Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
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Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Duskstar on September 25th 2011, 11:03 pm
Main Character
Name: Iceclaw, Ice that Freezes Rain
Age: 19 moons
Clan None at the moment
Mentor: Shimmerfur (RiverClan)
Apprentice: None at the moment
Favourite Colours: Blue, black and silver
Favourite Fresh-kills: A freshly-killed arctic hare or salmon
Favourite Place in Camp: The Tunnels of Secrets... where the Phantom dwells
Favourite Quotes: Innocent until proven guilty. The night is young. Beware of the Phantom of Shadows. The night has a thousand eyes.
Weaknessess: Being small in size, she relies more on her agility than her strength. Not very used to climbing trees but prefers jumping.
Special Traits: Ability to swim well. A very fast runner. Agile and nimble. She is very observant to her surroundings. She can survive even in the harshest of snowstorms and is good at blending herself. Thus, she is known for being the "Phantom of Shadows".
Family: Whiteshadow (Father), Hunter (Mother), Rogue (Sister), Coldfur (Brother)
Personality: Occasionally mischievous and enjoys playing pranks. Has a cheerful disposition and is very clever. She is incredibly agile and loves to run. She also has the ability to unnerve others.
Description: Very pretty blue-gray she-cat with barely visible stripes along the back with white-tipped ears and unusual azure blue eyes which was inherited from her mother. She has a long tail, pale underbelly and a lean figure. She has a vicious scar across her right cheek from a kithood accident and always hides it behind a long tuft of white fur. Her claws are three inches long with incredibly sharp edges.
History: Iceclaw was born in RiverClan, thus, explains her extraordinary swimming skills and her lack of fear for water. Her birth itself was a curse, for her mother was a rogue. Being rejected from young, Iceclaw had no friends nor company in RiverClan. Her ever protective brother, Coldfur, always stayed by her side, standing up for her and gradually, she started to gain confidence of herself. She only had one friend, Tigerspirit, in RiverClan and the two of them were really good friends. Even though she tried her very best to prove her own loyalties to her Clan, she knew deep down in her heart that there will never be a place for her in RiverClan.
Iceclaw had a dream one day with a strange tom called Silverhawk. He claimed that she was one of his kin and he had died many many moons ago. Little did she know that he from the Dark Forest . He recruited her when she just became an apprentice, thinking that she was worthy enough to be trained. She was trained under Silverhawk for a while before becoming Fallendust, a formidable Dark Forest warrior's apprentice. She was a newly-made warrior when she found out she had been tricked. Just as she left, Fallendust mysteriously told her a prophecy.
"You will lose everything you love. Go through a time of darkness, loneliness and misery. But all those are worth it, to become the cat you were supposed to be."
Iceclaw was deeply puzzled by the prophecy but she ignored it, thinking that Fallendust was just trying to trick her again. It became true when her father died in a battle against ThunderClan and eventually, even her brother mysteriously disappeared, leaving her behind in a mournful and lonely world. She couldn't it any longer and hence, left the Clan at a mere age of 9 moons, barely a warrior. She wandered far and wide across the snowy plains, hiding in the darkness as she spied on the other Clans. She learned some of their secrets and managed to use her new skills to survive by herself when she was found by another Clan, barely conscious, lying in the thick snow right in the middle of a snowstorm. She was then brought in by IceClan and has been living there ever since, finally accepted for who she was.
One day while on a morning stroll around IceClan Fortress, she meets a tom called Fang. He was lying by the mountains, barely alive, too cold and exhausted. She saved his life by dragging him to a cave, her favourite place in IceClan's territory, warming him up as she lay beside him. After that incident, they became great friends, always secretly meeting up right before dusk, sharing memories of their past, their worries while watching the sunset together. She found out more about Fang and realised that both of their stories were similar, rejected and untrusted. She invited him to join IceClan and he did. Afterwards, their friendship grew into love and they became mates. A few moons after they had four kits, they grew distant. They no longer met up like they used to. Believing that she didn’t liked him anymore, Fang never spoke to her, always keeping his distance. Iceclaw still was persistent, always sitting by the place where they used to meet up, watching the sunset alone with sorrow, always waiting, always hoping. Things changed when she saw him one day. Old memories flooded through Iceclaw when he joined her, ever so silently, watching as the sky darkened together. She realised that Fang had misunderstood her for not loving him. They made up and became mates again.
A few moons later, her adopted sister, Snowlily left IceClan and joined WindClan to be with her mate, Honeystar. Iceclaw was depressed, feeling alone once more without any company. She left IceClan secretly in the dead of night one day and made her way towards the desert. She found the Tribe of the Falling Darkness, whom welcomed her to stay. She was surprised to see Tigerspirit with the Tribe cats and decided to join them and learn their ways. Fang found out that she left and was enraged. Both of them decided that they were no longer mates but could still remain as friends... just like the old times.
More about Iceclaw's Family
Whiteshadow (Father): A black tom with a distinctive white pelt and bright yellow eyes. He is a well-knowned RiverClan warrior for his battle skills. He favours his son more than his daughters, which makes Iceclaw extremely jealous. He now lies in StarClan.
Hunter (Mother): A white she-cat with stunningly beautiful azure blue eyes. Hunter is a rogue and lives in the snowy mountains. She saves Whiteshadow's live one day from a harsh blizzard and from then on, the both of them develops a strong friendship. They eventually became mates.
Rogue (Sister): A dark gray she-cat with white-tipped ears and a nicked ear. Her mother, Hunter, insist to have a daughter to be raised as a rogue like her. She lives with her mother and has never met her father or any of her littermates.
Coldfur (Brother): A blue-gray RiverClan tom with gray paws. He has one green and blue eye. He loves his sister, Iceclaw, very much and is always by her side until one day he mysteriously disappears and nobody has heard of him ever since.
Other Cats
Fallendust: A formidable tawny brown Dark Forest warrior with white chin and icy blue eyes. His front fangs are very long and sharp. He actually fell in love with Iceclaw but she had no feelings for him. Until now, he still watches over her, sometimes whispering to her in her sleep.
Silverhawk: Silvery-furred tom with a pale muzzle. He has a distinctive fluffy tail and has long striped hind legs which is useful for springing. He claims that Iceclaw is his kin but no one knows whether it is true or not.
Thanks for reading!
Name: Iceclaw, Ice that Freezes Rain
Age: 19 moons
Clan None at the moment
Mentor: Shimmerfur (RiverClan)
Apprentice: None at the moment
Favourite Colours: Blue, black and silver
Favourite Fresh-kills: A freshly-killed arctic hare or salmon
Favourite Place in Camp: The Tunnels of Secrets... where the Phantom dwells
Favourite Quotes: Innocent until proven guilty. The night is young. Beware of the Phantom of Shadows. The night has a thousand eyes.
Weaknessess: Being small in size, she relies more on her agility than her strength. Not very used to climbing trees but prefers jumping.
Special Traits: Ability to swim well. A very fast runner. Agile and nimble. She is very observant to her surroundings. She can survive even in the harshest of snowstorms and is good at blending herself. Thus, she is known for being the "Phantom of Shadows".
Family: Whiteshadow (Father), Hunter (Mother), Rogue (Sister), Coldfur (Brother)
Personality: Occasionally mischievous and enjoys playing pranks. Has a cheerful disposition and is very clever. She is incredibly agile and loves to run. She also has the ability to unnerve others.
Description: Very pretty blue-gray she-cat with barely visible stripes along the back with white-tipped ears and unusual azure blue eyes which was inherited from her mother. She has a long tail, pale underbelly and a lean figure. She has a vicious scar across her right cheek from a kithood accident and always hides it behind a long tuft of white fur. Her claws are three inches long with incredibly sharp edges.
History: Iceclaw was born in RiverClan, thus, explains her extraordinary swimming skills and her lack of fear for water. Her birth itself was a curse, for her mother was a rogue. Being rejected from young, Iceclaw had no friends nor company in RiverClan. Her ever protective brother, Coldfur, always stayed by her side, standing up for her and gradually, she started to gain confidence of herself. She only had one friend, Tigerspirit, in RiverClan and the two of them were really good friends. Even though she tried her very best to prove her own loyalties to her Clan, she knew deep down in her heart that there will never be a place for her in RiverClan.
Iceclaw had a dream one day with a strange tom called Silverhawk. He claimed that she was one of his kin and he had died many many moons ago. Little did she know that he from the Dark Forest . He recruited her when she just became an apprentice, thinking that she was worthy enough to be trained. She was trained under Silverhawk for a while before becoming Fallendust, a formidable Dark Forest warrior's apprentice. She was a newly-made warrior when she found out she had been tricked. Just as she left, Fallendust mysteriously told her a prophecy.
"You will lose everything you love. Go through a time of darkness, loneliness and misery. But all those are worth it, to become the cat you were supposed to be."
Iceclaw was deeply puzzled by the prophecy but she ignored it, thinking that Fallendust was just trying to trick her again. It became true when her father died in a battle against ThunderClan and eventually, even her brother mysteriously disappeared, leaving her behind in a mournful and lonely world. She couldn't it any longer and hence, left the Clan at a mere age of 9 moons, barely a warrior. She wandered far and wide across the snowy plains, hiding in the darkness as she spied on the other Clans. She learned some of their secrets and managed to use her new skills to survive by herself when she was found by another Clan, barely conscious, lying in the thick snow right in the middle of a snowstorm. She was then brought in by IceClan and has been living there ever since, finally accepted for who she was.
One day while on a morning stroll around IceClan Fortress, she meets a tom called Fang. He was lying by the mountains, barely alive, too cold and exhausted. She saved his life by dragging him to a cave, her favourite place in IceClan's territory, warming him up as she lay beside him. After that incident, they became great friends, always secretly meeting up right before dusk, sharing memories of their past, their worries while watching the sunset together. She found out more about Fang and realised that both of their stories were similar, rejected and untrusted. She invited him to join IceClan and he did. Afterwards, their friendship grew into love and they became mates. A few moons after they had four kits, they grew distant. They no longer met up like they used to. Believing that she didn’t liked him anymore, Fang never spoke to her, always keeping his distance. Iceclaw still was persistent, always sitting by the place where they used to meet up, watching the sunset alone with sorrow, always waiting, always hoping. Things changed when she saw him one day. Old memories flooded through Iceclaw when he joined her, ever so silently, watching as the sky darkened together. She realised that Fang had misunderstood her for not loving him. They made up and became mates again.
A few moons later, her adopted sister, Snowlily left IceClan and joined WindClan to be with her mate, Honeystar. Iceclaw was depressed, feeling alone once more without any company. She left IceClan secretly in the dead of night one day and made her way towards the desert. She found the Tribe of the Falling Darkness, whom welcomed her to stay. She was surprised to see Tigerspirit with the Tribe cats and decided to join them and learn their ways. Fang found out that she left and was enraged. Both of them decided that they were no longer mates but could still remain as friends... just like the old times.
More about Iceclaw's Family
Whiteshadow (Father): A black tom with a distinctive white pelt and bright yellow eyes. He is a well-knowned RiverClan warrior for his battle skills. He favours his son more than his daughters, which makes Iceclaw extremely jealous. He now lies in StarClan.
Hunter (Mother): A white she-cat with stunningly beautiful azure blue eyes. Hunter is a rogue and lives in the snowy mountains. She saves Whiteshadow's live one day from a harsh blizzard and from then on, the both of them develops a strong friendship. They eventually became mates.
Rogue (Sister): A dark gray she-cat with white-tipped ears and a nicked ear. Her mother, Hunter, insist to have a daughter to be raised as a rogue like her. She lives with her mother and has never met her father or any of her littermates.
Coldfur (Brother): A blue-gray RiverClan tom with gray paws. He has one green and blue eye. He loves his sister, Iceclaw, very much and is always by her side until one day he mysteriously disappears and nobody has heard of him ever since.
Other Cats
Fallendust: A formidable tawny brown Dark Forest warrior with white chin and icy blue eyes. His front fangs are very long and sharp. He actually fell in love with Iceclaw but she had no feelings for him. Until now, he still watches over her, sometimes whispering to her in her sleep.
Silverhawk: Silvery-furred tom with a pale muzzle. He has a distinctive fluffy tail and has long striped hind legs which is useful for springing. He claims that Iceclaw is his kin but no one knows whether it is true or not.
Thanks for reading!
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Brightstar on October 11th 2011, 5:30 pm
Why don't you add mother and father info.? And you can add eye color to your description
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Duskstar on November 19th 2011, 5:56 am
Added, Brightstar!
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by SkyStar on November 19th 2011, 9:35 am
Wow I really like these.
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Spiritstrike on November 19th 2011, 11:54 am
If Featherpaw is your apprentice, shouldn`t you put that on your profile?
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Duskstar on November 20th 2011, 8:38 am
Thanks Skystar and yes I'll do that Tigerspirit!
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Snowlily on December 2nd 2011, 9:40 pm
Haha that's Iceclan now Iceclaw. 
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Duskstar on December 2nd 2011, 10:58 pm
Edit done!
Snowlily, how about me and you be sisters?
Snowlily, how about me and you be sisters?
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Snowlily on December 2nd 2011, 11:39 pm
Lol that' fine with me.
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Duskstar on December 17th 2011, 10:31 pm
I've edited quite a lot for my character! Do read it and comment! 
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Snowlily on December 17th 2011, 10:36 pm
You just gave me an idea for what to add to mine! Thanks! I think you'll like it and by the way it's really good. nice work.
I think you'll like it and by the way it's really good. nice work.
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Duskstar on December 18th 2011, 3:20 am
Thanks! I've updated on my history!
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Amberfur on December 18th 2011, 5:03 am
Wow that's a very detailed description of yourself. I like it! 
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Duskstar on December 18th 2011, 5:07 am
Haha thanks... I have a really sad history 
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Amberfur on December 18th 2011, 5:10 am
Aww... 
Don't cry. Anyway now you are happy. 
Don't cry. Anyway now you are happy.
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Duskstar on December 18th 2011, 5:21 am
Hahahahahahaha LOL!
I spent 15 minutes making this up... ^-^
I spent 15 minutes making this up... ^-^
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Amberfur on December 18th 2011, 7:17 am
Wow....O_O That's a long time.
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Icetail on December 18th 2011, 9:25 pm
That was really good Iceclaw! I'm thinking of updating mine but it won't be as fancy as yours
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Snowlily on December 18th 2011, 9:29 pm
Mines organized very simply and it has all the same information if not more. You can always just copy and paste my layout and use that to start reorganizing and improving yours. When I was doing mine I tried several different organization styles before I desided my current one was the best. It looks far nicer to have all the simple things one top so you don't overwhelm people with a post and the overall neatness of it is better. I'm looking forward to seeing yours, Icetail.
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Re: Iceclaw's Character(s) Updated!
by Icetail on December 18th 2011, 9:32 pm
Ok. I'll just copy your layout. I think I might add a few things but I'm not sure yet.
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