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Snowlily
by Snowlily on December 3rd 2011, 12:11 am
Name: Snowlily (Lily, Hima or Snowflake)
Clan: Windclan
Rank: Warrior/Queen
Age: 26 moons
Gender: She-cat
Mate (Crush): Honeystar (Former), Dragonclaw (Former)
Kits: Frostpaw (Frostwing), Phoenixpaw (Phoenixflower), Cedarpaw (Cedarheart), Aurorakit, Petalkit (Petalfrost), Mintkit, Trilliumkit
Parents: Unknown
Littermates: Iceclaw (Adopted)
Mentor: Shuriken, Honeystar, Applefur
Apprentice: None
Hobbies: Long walks, Hunting in her free time, Practicing her fighting skills
Favorite Fresh-kill: Rabbit, Eagle, Hawk, Gorse
Personality: Calm, Compassionate, Patient, Humble, Quiet, Loyal, Understanding, Friendly, Sensable, Intelligent, Curious, Dependable, Stubborn, Resourseful
Special Skills: Camouflage, Advanced in Hunting and Tracking, Fast, Agile
Appearance: Pure white, short haired she-cat with deep blue eyes and a soft pink nose. She is smaller than average and very agile. She has long white whiskers and a long tail. Her small size is compensated by her agility and ability to think on the run. Her small paws contain very sharp claws able to cut through most things quite easily. She is very light on her feet which makes padding over the snow no problem for her. Her instincts are rarely wrong and her ability to camouflage herself in the mountains of Iceclan is nearly flawless. She has a very soft and musical voice and usually has a gentle demeanor unless she feels threatened by something in which case she becomes very protective of her kits, clan mates and friends.
History: Snowlily was born as a kittypet. Much of her kittypet life was spent in her mother's nest tucked tightly into her warm, silky pelt with her siblings. She loved her mother's sweet scent, cooling tongue and musical voice. Her mother was a short-haired calico and white cat with bright green eyes. Her father was a smoky colored short-haired tom with a soft gentle blue gaze. When she reached two moons of age, she was removed from her life with her family and taken into a new twoleg's home.
In the beginning, she spent the time she had alone in the home exploring, but when the twolegs were home she was always hidden away. After another three moons with this new family had passed, she slowly began to warm up to them. Slowly they became her new family. The one that would replace her parents and siblings. She spent much of her time as a kit observing their tools and how they were used. Slowly, she began learning words and phrases of their language. By her sixth moon she was able to understand nearly everything they would say to one another. One night after her twolegs came home acting weird, the house got really quiet. She was always uncomfortable in the silence. They left the home again. She knew something strange was going on.
An uneasy feeling struck her. Then something else... An ashy taste hit her tongue and she began choking on a thickening smoke. The house was on fire. She was panicked as her search for an exit came up empty. Her stomach dropped. She raced frantically to the window in the front room of the house. Crying as loud as she could, she rose to her hind legs and clawed frantically at the window. She mewed helplessly as the families on the road gathered outside the home to watch the fire swallow the home up and her along with it. When the smoke had created a thick dark haze over the windows she knew they wouldn't see her. Her cries went unheard over the roaring of the fire and the people's whispering outside her home.
She began her second search of the house for an exit. Her heart raced as she raced through the house again desperately hoping that she had overlooked something. Again her search was in vain. She had no more luck finding an exit the second time. She gingerly avoided the fires blazing heat as the heat that radiated off of the flames scorched her pelt and skin, making her panic as she fought to avoid being burned alive. She fled the flames as much as she could until she was finally cornered in the back room of the house. As she sat there, no longer able to flee the flames she thought about her family and the times they spent in the room. She would be curled up next to a nice warm fire on their lap. She never thought something so deadly would bring back such nice memories. She watched the fire dance across the floor as it inched closer to her.
Suddenly she felt something move her. As though something was forcing her to cross the room. Just a gentle push but still something. After rising to her feet she glanced around the room dazed and confused. Her mind was blank now, as she found herself moving towards the firebox. In one last effort to hold on to her happy memories she curled up in the corner and made herself comfortable in the ashes. Her eyes and nose burned from the smoke and heat of the blaze. She felt herself slipping into unconsciousness, her mind now whirling with thoughts of dying in that firebox...
When she awake her vision was clouded. All of the shapes that surrounded her seemed to blur together, but even though she couldn't see clearly she knew she wasn't the only one inside the remains of the house. A dark figure she couldn't make out loomed over her. She blinked repetitively, trying to calm her dry, burning eyes. As her vision started to become clearer she could make out the shape of the the large, brown tabby tom.
She doesn't remember much about where she was from. Occasionally, she will have flashbacks about a life she doesn't recognize. All that's known is she spent many moons wandering around the forests unknown to the other cats. She didn't know her parents and the best she can guess is they were separated when she was about 9 moons old. After spending so much time traveling she became used to being alone but longed for a home where she could stay permanently. Eventually she came to a new forest where all the cats lived in clans and fought for their territory. She had considered staying in one of those clans and adjusting to their lifestyle but her instincts told her to keep searching and eventually she came to the mountains where when she crossed one of their borders she was taken by the Iceclan cats. She's been there ever since. After eventually being welcomed to join Iceclan, she quickly adapted to her new life.
After several moons passed she was exploring the territory and a blizzard came in. On her way back to the fortress she came across a small lost cat that seemed to be lying there unconscious. Knowing that if she left the cat there she was surely going to die in the storm, she carried her back to the Iceclan fortress. Snowlily waited for the strange cat to wake up again. Days passed before that happened, but when she did the Iceclan cats learned that she was an apprentice from Riverclan but she had left her clan in search of a new home. She knew what it was like to not know anyone and have to start over fresh. She had to do it for many moons herself. She took the new cat, Iceclaw, in and trained with her for a few moons longer before the new cat was accepted into the clan.
Pictures:
Snowkit
Snowpaw
Snowlily
Thanks for reading. 
Clan: Windclan
Rank: Warrior/Queen
Age: 26 moons
Gender: She-cat
Mate (Crush): Honeystar (Former), Dragonclaw (Former)
Kits: Frostpaw (Frostwing), Phoenixpaw (Phoenixflower), Cedarpaw (Cedarheart), Aurorakit, Petalkit (Petalfrost), Mintkit, Trilliumkit
Parents: Unknown
Littermates: Iceclaw (Adopted)
Mentor: Shuriken, Honeystar, Applefur
Apprentice: None
Hobbies: Long walks, Hunting in her free time, Practicing her fighting skills
Favorite Fresh-kill: Rabbit, Eagle, Hawk, Gorse
Personality: Calm, Compassionate, Patient, Humble, Quiet, Loyal, Understanding, Friendly, Sensable, Intelligent, Curious, Dependable, Stubborn, Resourseful
Special Skills: Camouflage, Advanced in Hunting and Tracking, Fast, Agile
Appearance: Pure white, short haired she-cat with deep blue eyes and a soft pink nose. She is smaller than average and very agile. She has long white whiskers and a long tail. Her small size is compensated by her agility and ability to think on the run. Her small paws contain very sharp claws able to cut through most things quite easily. She is very light on her feet which makes padding over the snow no problem for her. Her instincts are rarely wrong and her ability to camouflage herself in the mountains of Iceclan is nearly flawless. She has a very soft and musical voice and usually has a gentle demeanor unless she feels threatened by something in which case she becomes very protective of her kits, clan mates and friends.
History: Snowlily was born as a kittypet. Much of her kittypet life was spent in her mother's nest tucked tightly into her warm, silky pelt with her siblings. She loved her mother's sweet scent, cooling tongue and musical voice. Her mother was a short-haired calico and white cat with bright green eyes. Her father was a smoky colored short-haired tom with a soft gentle blue gaze. When she reached two moons of age, she was removed from her life with her family and taken into a new twoleg's home.
In the beginning, she spent the time she had alone in the home exploring, but when the twolegs were home she was always hidden away. After another three moons with this new family had passed, she slowly began to warm up to them. Slowly they became her new family. The one that would replace her parents and siblings. She spent much of her time as a kit observing their tools and how they were used. Slowly, she began learning words and phrases of their language. By her sixth moon she was able to understand nearly everything they would say to one another. One night after her twolegs came home acting weird, the house got really quiet. She was always uncomfortable in the silence. They left the home again. She knew something strange was going on.
An uneasy feeling struck her. Then something else... An ashy taste hit her tongue and she began choking on a thickening smoke. The house was on fire. She was panicked as her search for an exit came up empty. Her stomach dropped. She raced frantically to the window in the front room of the house. Crying as loud as she could, she rose to her hind legs and clawed frantically at the window. She mewed helplessly as the families on the road gathered outside the home to watch the fire swallow the home up and her along with it. When the smoke had created a thick dark haze over the windows she knew they wouldn't see her. Her cries went unheard over the roaring of the fire and the people's whispering outside her home.
She began her second search of the house for an exit. Her heart raced as she raced through the house again desperately hoping that she had overlooked something. Again her search was in vain. She had no more luck finding an exit the second time. She gingerly avoided the fires blazing heat as the heat that radiated off of the flames scorched her pelt and skin, making her panic as she fought to avoid being burned alive. She fled the flames as much as she could until she was finally cornered in the back room of the house. As she sat there, no longer able to flee the flames she thought about her family and the times they spent in the room. She would be curled up next to a nice warm fire on their lap. She never thought something so deadly would bring back such nice memories. She watched the fire dance across the floor as it inched closer to her.
Suddenly she felt something move her. As though something was forcing her to cross the room. Just a gentle push but still something. After rising to her feet she glanced around the room dazed and confused. Her mind was blank now, as she found herself moving towards the firebox. In one last effort to hold on to her happy memories she curled up in the corner and made herself comfortable in the ashes. Her eyes and nose burned from the smoke and heat of the blaze. She felt herself slipping into unconsciousness, her mind now whirling with thoughts of dying in that firebox...
...
When she awake her vision was clouded. All of the shapes that surrounded her seemed to blur together, but even though she couldn't see clearly she knew she wasn't the only one inside the remains of the house. A dark figure she couldn't make out loomed over her. She blinked repetitively, trying to calm her dry, burning eyes. As her vision started to become clearer she could make out the shape of the the large, brown tabby tom.
She doesn't remember much about where she was from. Occasionally, she will have flashbacks about a life she doesn't recognize. All that's known is she spent many moons wandering around the forests unknown to the other cats. She didn't know her parents and the best she can guess is they were separated when she was about 9 moons old. After spending so much time traveling she became used to being alone but longed for a home where she could stay permanently. Eventually she came to a new forest where all the cats lived in clans and fought for their territory. She had considered staying in one of those clans and adjusting to their lifestyle but her instincts told her to keep searching and eventually she came to the mountains where when she crossed one of their borders she was taken by the Iceclan cats. She's been there ever since. After eventually being welcomed to join Iceclan, she quickly adapted to her new life.
After several moons passed she was exploring the territory and a blizzard came in. On her way back to the fortress she came across a small lost cat that seemed to be lying there unconscious. Knowing that if she left the cat there she was surely going to die in the storm, she carried her back to the Iceclan fortress. Snowlily waited for the strange cat to wake up again. Days passed before that happened, but when she did the Iceclan cats learned that she was an apprentice from Riverclan but she had left her clan in search of a new home. She knew what it was like to not know anyone and have to start over fresh. She had to do it for many moons herself. She took the new cat, Iceclaw, in and trained with her for a few moons longer before the new cat was accepted into the clan.
Pictures:
Snowkit
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Snowpaw
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Snowlily
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Thanks for reading. Last edited by Snowlily on March 26th 2012, 8:09 pm; edited 56 times in total
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Re: Snowlily
by Lunarlight on December 3rd 2011, 9:01 am
You were tired when you made this? You must be legendary when you are more awake 
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Re: Snowlily
by Snowlily on December 3rd 2011, 11:01 am
Lol thanks but I actually just meant that I was too tired to think of what to say. It wasn't antything special.
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Re: Snowlily
by Snowlily on December 3rd 2011, 11:22 am
Thank you Kittystar. If you have any advice or suggestions on things to add please let me know.
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Re: Snowlily
by Streamfur on December 3rd 2011, 4:21 pm
You should have a skills section! Like if your fast, and good hunter, and good fighter, ect..
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Re: Snowlily
by Snowlily on December 17th 2011, 12:59 pm
I have finally edited this and improved it. Thanks for reading everyone! Let me know what you think or if you have any suggestions.
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Re: Snowlily
by Fang on December 17th 2011, 2:37 pm
You should maybe put one of her dreams about her old life! P.S. I like it a lot!
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Re: Snowlily
by Snowlily on December 17th 2011, 2:40 pm
I was thinking about writing my own fanfic about that but I'm not really sure what to do for that yet. Thanks Fang.
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Re: Snowlily
by Fang on December 17th 2011, 2:41 pm
You`re welcome! I love how you wrote it in color also!
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Re: Snowlily
by Honeystar on December 17th 2011, 3:14 pm
Well I don't really see anything that needs improvements. Your profile is certainly more colourful and thoroughly detailed than most people do. I might actually update mine to that standard too. Love it. 
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Re: Snowlily
by Frostpaw on December 17th 2011, 3:18 pm
It should have pictures of the warrior too!!!!
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Re: Snowlily
by Honeystar on December 17th 2011, 3:25 pm
Oooh that's a good idea too [I've done something like that for me once I think].
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Re: Snowlily
by SkyStar on December 17th 2011, 3:31 pm
That is amazing and I hope that you will have fun at your new home
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Re: Snowlily
by Lunarlight on December 17th 2011, 4:01 pm
She's moving away from her parent's house now.
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Re: Snowlily
by Snowlily on December 17th 2011, 4:06 pm
Is that what Skystar was talking about? I wasn't quite sure. By the way Riversplash as you can tell it has been updated and expanded a lot. What do you think? How does it look? This is sort of what I was looking for before when I decided I was too tired to finish it.
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Re: Snowlily
by Snowlily on December 17th 2011, 7:58 pm
Lol thanks. I guess I was voted up for it to and didn't even realize. What should I add to it though? 
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